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A Sin? by ~waymorewickedwitch:iconwaymorewickedwitch:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Open


my David

sculpted of flesh and bone
firm and warm beneath my touch

you glide angelic through me
you offer yourself unabashed

there is no sins of the flesh
my David

all creation waits

the Devil takes no interest

and God no longer cares

because my David

that is why we were made
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Author's Comments

a lover explaining to a simple soul

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~Verona84 Sep 21, 2005, 1:35:15 PM
That's really beautiful! Thanks for stopping by my gallery so I could find yours :)
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~waymorewickedwitch Sep 21, 2005, 5:34:48 PM
I don't have the visual talent that you have, but enjoy my words.

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and then it HIT...the sudden realization that Time, Love, and Death meant nothing to me before that first cup of coffee...:peace:
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~chelsea-belle-06 Sep 21, 2005, 6:18:10 PM
i really like this poem.. its very romantic and very descriptive.. i like it a lot!!
:heart: thanks for the comments on my pictures, and im glad i got to read some of your poetry:)
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~waymorewickedwitch Sep 21, 2005, 6:28:54 PM
:rose: No, thank you.

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and then it HIT...the sudden realization that Time, Love, and Death meant nothing to me before that first cup of coffee...:peace:
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~waymorewickedwitch Sep 23, 2005, 10:14:09 AM
:floating:

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and then it HIT...the sudden realization that Time, Love, and Death meant nothing to me before that first cup of coffee...:peace:
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*LightSource Jul 17, 2006, 9:50:01 PM
Just happened on this.
A lovely lyrical thing.
Whats here is so good
and works so well
you might consider more lines...

I know its a painful time...
I have been enduring such for
several years now, so know you have
some moral support and
perspectives...

many regards
Sid
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~waymorewickedwitch Jul 18, 2006, 1:29:59 PM
oh, my support and perspective! Ah wonderful thing...many thanks!

Sincerely...many thanks.

deepest...

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and then it HIT...the sudden realization that Time, Love, and Death meant nothing to me before that first cup of coffee...:peace:
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*LightSource Jul 20, 2006, 9:37:11 PM
I feel guilty that I am so
short of time for more discussion...
Just know that there's support
out there...
For anxiety - and there is much to be anxious
about in my case - I use xanax ...
Cheap, and easier on the system
then traditional remedies...
Short-circuits appropriate neurons amazingly well...
Produces just about the same effect as a 5-mile run...
Dr Sid
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~waymorewickedwitch Jul 22, 2006, 8:29:37 AM
currentl unable to access thought processes...my train of thought as jumped the tracks!

I need quiet and peace and solitude...discussion will come, I'm sure of it.
Until then peace, prosperity and productivity...

deepest...

--
and then it HIT...the sudden realization that Time, Love, and Death meant nothing to me before that first cup of coffee...:peace:
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